It was raining heavily when Ila stepped out of the car. She walked fast and got to the door steps” Knock, Knock” She shouted. ”Anyone home?” She heard a grumpy voice say “Go away” Then she heard” Are you alone on the steps?”” Umm, I have my parents, big brother, big sister and small baby twins in the car.” ” Tell your family to come in” O.K” Yelled Ila over the wind. Her little sister anyway was crying and yelling her head off wanting to go to the toilet. The lady opened the door and said “Hurry. Tell your family you may enter if you give me 5 golden coins.” ” But we don’t have any gold coins!!!!” “Then go away the woman screamed. Ila ran back to the car only to find them have blood around the whole car. “What happened?!!?!!?” Ila cried and screamed together. Her dad softly said” Go and give the lady your mums gold earrings, bracelet and necklace. That’s all the gold we have. It’ll have to do or we won’t live.” ”ok sobbed Ila. Her dad got the stuff off Ila’s mum and gave it to Ila. “Hurry “Wheezed her dad. Ila ran out of the car with the gold in her hands. She knocked on the door and the woman said” Hand it over.” Ila asked if she could use the phone if she gave her the gold. “No!!!!!!” The lady snatched it off Ila and shut the door. Ila threw a large rock at the window but it just bounced off and hit Ila in the head. She went unconscious. The lady shot Ila’s family dead. Ila woke up in a strange world. Everything was either black or white. “What happened?” She said frustrated. The lady came out of the corner with very dark pink high heels. “I have taken you to my kingdom where all are appreciated. You will be taken back in time to change what you do in the car. It will make your family drive on and they wont be dead anymore.” Ila said” Ohhh thank-you so much. I will give you 10,000 gold coins and you will be happy forever. Bye nice old lady” ”Bye” The lady smiled softly. Ila ran back to the car and as the lady said, her family was there again all healthy and they didn’t even know that they died. Ila sat in the car and said”Mum, Dad the lady wasn’t there, I mean ummm the person that lives there isn’t there so we should drive on. “You sound suspicious” said her annoyed parents.”
To be continued
Friday, July 3, 2009
Wednesday, July 1, 2009
Bad Year
The war
It was a dark and misty night I was with my GORLOCK tribe, we are going on a scouting mission to try and find any survivors from the war .This war started 1000 years ago when the GAMIZIOD master that had attacked our tribe the survivors had ran away ,the lucky ones got into the fleet ships. I was the main general but most of us are dead .On our ships we have discovered cloning and on our main ship is ready to attack .Now we are ready.
Dear Diary
Today our tribe are going to attack we have 400
Battle ships we have no hope
Our ships have started to fail for some reason BOOM!!!!!!
The engines broke up before we entered the Earths atmosphere.
Now we are defenseless .I warned all ships to go all back to our secret base.
Number 241 pod did not get the warning before KA BOOM!!!!!!! .
This giant gold space ship appears out of nothing with a giant laser gun
And blasts him right out of the sky.
TO BE CONTINUED?
It was a dark and misty night I was with my GORLOCK tribe, we are going on a scouting mission to try and find any survivors from the war .This war started 1000 years ago when the GAMIZIOD master that had attacked our tribe the survivors had ran away ,the lucky ones got into the fleet ships. I was the main general but most of us are dead .On our ships we have discovered cloning and on our main ship is ready to attack .Now we are ready.
Dear Diary
Today our tribe are going to attack we have 400
Battle ships we have no hope
Our ships have started to fail for some reason BOOM!!!!!!
The engines broke up before we entered the Earths atmosphere.
Now we are defenseless .I warned all ships to go all back to our secret base.
Number 241 pod did not get the warning before KA BOOM!!!!!!! .
This giant gold space ship appears out of nothing with a giant laser gun
And blasts him right out of the sky.
TO BE CONTINUED?
The war by jesse m
The war
It was a dark and misty night I was with my GORLOCK tribe, we are going on a scouting mission to try and find any survivors from the war .This war started 1000 years ago when the GAMIZIOD master that had attacked our tribe the survivors had ran away ,the lucky ones got into the fleet ships. I was the main general but most of us are dead .On our ships we have discovered cloning and on our main ship is ready to attack .Now we are ready.
Dear Diary
Today our tribe are going to attack we have 400
Battle ships we have no hope
Our ships have started to fail for some reason BOOM!!!!!!
The engines broke up before we entered the Earths atmosphere.
Now we are defenseless .I warned all ships to go all back to our secret base.
Number 241 pod did not get the warning before KA BOOM!!!!!!! .
This giant gold space ship appears out of nothing with a giant laser gun
And blasts him right out of the sky.
TO BE CONTINUED?
It was a dark and misty night I was with my GORLOCK tribe, we are going on a scouting mission to try and find any survivors from the war .This war started 1000 years ago when the GAMIZIOD master that had attacked our tribe the survivors had ran away ,the lucky ones got into the fleet ships. I was the main general but most of us are dead .On our ships we have discovered cloning and on our main ship is ready to attack .Now we are ready.
Dear Diary
Today our tribe are going to attack we have 400
Battle ships we have no hope
Our ships have started to fail for some reason BOOM!!!!!!
The engines broke up before we entered the Earths atmosphere.
Now we are defenseless .I warned all ships to go all back to our secret base.
Number 241 pod did not get the warning before KA BOOM!!!!!!! .
This giant gold space ship appears out of nothing with a giant laser gun
And blasts him right out of the sky.
TO BE CONTINUED?
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