Friday, October 16, 2009

THE DISAPPEARING DOG



My dog jumped up and started barking, and then he ran out of the house. I ran after him but when I got outside I saw him floating in mid air, he started rising higher and higher. I tried grabbing him but he was too high so I ran inside frantically all this time him barking like mad. I yelled out for my Dad I knew e would be tall enough but I couldn’t find him. There was a plastic rake in the shed that we had bought the day before so I ran to get it. The shed door was locked but Dad’s voice was faintly heard in the distance. There was also a familiar sound drowning out most of his voice. It took me a while but I ran over to the neighbor’s house because I remembered that Dad was going over to chop down some trees with his chainsaw. I jumped the fence ran over to him and yelled, but he couldn’t hear me, he had his earmuffs on. While I was going back to the house the sound of the chainsaw stopped and was replaced with a large thump, the tree was cut down. I ran back up to him and pulled his hand, I ran away and he followed. But when we got there… he was gone.


2 comments:

MomoRika Park said...

Hi!!
This is Rika!
I used to go to NEVN School

Your writing is awesome!!
Keep up the good work!
You might even become an author when you grow up!!

Anonymous said...

I love it it makes me want to keep
reading!!!!

Celeste